The hot tub time machine.

The Hot Tub Time Machine

By Kieran Seal and Lorenzo Graydon

Lorenzo and I have been working together on a story. This is it so far:

[Chapter One: The Past]

-{Kieran’s Point of view}-

I ran into the hot tub, only to see that everything around me was changing. Things seemed to be going back in time Trees and crops seemed to going back into their holes and clouds were moving backwards.  Eventually I got out of the hot tub to be around the time dinosaurs existed. There were pterodactyls and worst of all, a tyrannosaurus rex was running straight for me! I attempted to run but eventually got cornered. Fortunately for me, the hot tub time machine was in the corner. I went back, but ended up about a week ahead of where I was before all the comotion. Suddenly, I saw somebody else jump into the hot tub and then disappear from view.

-{Lorenzo’s Point of View}-

I jumped into the hot tub everything was going backwards I thought I was dreaming but when I hopped out there was a giant tyrannosaurus rex chasing me. I picked up a bone and smacked it in the head but it didn't affect him so  I went into a cave to find survivors. Then a giant pterodactyl lifted me and dropped me into tar but this guy called billy saved me from the tar. I almost died but thanks for billy I survived. And that pterodactyl was now our dinner. I asked “where are we?”  they said “In the dinosaur age.” I said “What does pterodactyl taste like?”, they said “Like chicken.” so I stayed there until my sister jumped in there and I disappeared

-{Billy’s Point Of View}-

I saw a male jump out of the hot tub, screaming. I thought that he was screaming because he found something really nice, so i went in. Everything happened backwards, and eventually I was back in the dark ages. Having studied the dark ages, I jumped into the tub again. This time, though, I was transported to the time the dinosaurs ruled the world. Suddenly, a man was dropped from a pterodactyl and just before he hit the tar layered at the bottom, I grabbed him and heaved his unconscious body through the hot tub time machine.

-{David’s Point of View}-

I saw an empty hot tub and decided to go in. After all, I had finished my work for that day. But Suddenly, Everything seemed to be turning back. Trees were going back into seeds which then were transported elsewhere, and when I got out I was seeing actual dinosaurs! Triceratops, pterodactyls and other dinos! Suddenly, a Tyrannosaurus Rex came charging at me! I climbed a tree as fast as I could, but then the tree was knocked down. Luckily for me, the part I was on landed in water, and I swam to the shore desperately. Eventually, I managed to get to the hot tub time machine again and was transported back to the present.

-{Jeff’s Point of View}-

I hopped into a hot tub but then I woke up in dinosaur land. A pterodactyl swooped in, but luckily I dodged at the last possible moment. As it came for a second swoop, it flew away as the earth trembled. It trembled multiple times, so I could only imagine it was a T Rex coming for me. In this I was correct. I ran towards the hot tub time machine, but all entrances were blocked except one. The dino continued this game, but eventually I reached the hot tub time machine.

-{Oliver’s point of view}-

I saw a hot tub, and my first instinct was to jump in. I did that, seeing no threats but when I hopped in, everything went back in time. I found myself in a strange, overgrown land. Suddenly, a T rex lunged at me. I ran back to the hot tub time machine, but it took about a minute to work. Don’t worry, the T Rex was patient and let me go.

-{Daniel’s point of view}-

I saw a vacant hot tub, and decided to go in. Suddenly, the earth stopped but started re-winding. Eventually I was in a dinosaur land, so I decide to explore a bit. I saw a pterodactyl drop a man, who was saved by another man, who shot the pterodactyl with an arrow. I felt pretty scared, so I decided to build a treehouse. It was hard work, but eventually I had a two story treehouse. Then I went back to the hot tub and climbed inside.

[Chapter Two: The Future]

-{Christopher’s Point of View}-

I jumped into the hot tub. Suddenly, everything sped up! Everything except for me, that is. When I hopped out, I found myself in a futuristic place. Robots were littered everywhere and technology was supreme! Suddenly, a green laser shone above my head, as I found myself levitating. Please find me, it's dark in here and aliens are all around me.

-{Teresa’s point of view}-

I went to have a relaxing bath but next minute I see robots and magnetic trains floating cars and teleporters. I asked “am I in the future?”. Then a robot replied “yes.” in a low pitched voice. Then the robot grabbed me and said “You have to be a robot so I will make you a robot”. I went into the factory. It was dark and dull, but just before they started turning me into a robot, I was back at home or was I? dun dun dun!

-{John’s Point Of View}-

I saw an empty hot tub, so i decided to jump in. Suddenly, everything sped up and I felt nauseous for a minute. When I saw properly again, I was in a futuristic world. Knowing how futuristic KFC is, I looked around for a KFC. I found one, but when i got in I saw a heck-ton of robots. Their eyes turned from green to red, as they started driving towards me. As soon as I knew it, I was trapped in what seemed to be a Plasma Forcefield. Eventually I got out, and straight away I ran to the hot tub time machine.

-{Cadences point of view}-

I was playing hide and seek then it was my turn to hide so I hid in the bathtub but then I was in a future world. I was scared so I called out to my mum but she was a robot. I screamed “ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” I said “I want to go home to mummy an brother”. But five seconds later I went back home I said “yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay”.

-{Jack’s Point of view}-

I was walking when I suddenly fell into a hot tub. My clothes got wet and I ended up in a futuristic land. A robot rammed into me, then threw me over. I ran into it but it flung me in the air. I ran into the hot tub time machine, not wanting a fight against a robot.

[Chapter 3: World War l part 1]

-{Tyreese’s point of view}-

I went to have a bath after a stressed day of work then I hop into the bath and I have an army suit on. Then bang went a gun “ok nothing bad is happening” I said “I'm just  dreami ohno a bomb take cover”. BOOM went the bomb there was heaps of dead people everywhere I hid in a hole, then I dug a hole all the way to there side then I was home again.

-{Bob’s Point Of View}-

I saw a hot tub and decided to go in. As I hopped out, I heard gunfire and ran. I saw a barricade and hopped behind it. Armed soldiers saw me, so I ran again. As I nearly missed a cannonball, another one fired, simultaneously creating an ear splitting BANG! I dodged lots of other cannonballs, and I can tell you it was as hard as milking a cow without a bucket. Eventually, I got to the hot tub time machine and was whizzed back to the present.

-{Liam’s Point Of View}-

I saw a vacant hot tub, so with a loud SPLASH! I went in. I held my breath for as long as I could, but when I poked my head up I realised I was in WW1. I ran across no man’s land, which was an amazing mistake on my part. With a BANG! I saw cannonballs coming at me. I front flipped over them. I saw, to my amazement, a man dodging cannonballs and heading for a different hot tub. Then as quickly as he had come, he disappeared. I decided to meet him, so I jumped into the hot tub time machine again.

-{Luke’s point of view}-

I was hoping in the bath after a day of getting bullied I had a black eye bruises everywhere you can imagine so I hopped in the bath. Then my bruises were gone but I was wearing camo and I had a gun then next minute a bomb hits me “i'm covered in bruises again but now i'm in more pain” I shouted. Then I teleported back in the bath.

-{Noah’s point of view}-

I hopped in a hot tub because I felt like it but I teleported into a war zone. I was holding a gun. It was scary holding a gun but BOOM went a rocket that came out a rocket launcher, bang went a gun I screamed “ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!” Then I teleported in my bath but “ouch it's hot mum why did you make my bath hot?”.

[Joke time]

-{Catty mc cat face VS the Mouse}-

I snuck down the hall, out of sight. Minutes ago, I had narrowly escaped the dog. There, THERE was my target. A mouse about the size of my head then cut in half. I leaped at it, and with a loud MEEEOOOWWW, I got my target. I then chomped down delightedly, before my cat food was served. “It was delightful” I said, but in cat language it would have been “meow meow meow meow meow”.

[End Of Joke Time For Now]

[WW1 Part Two]

-{Freddy’s Point of view}-

I saw an empty hot tub, so I soared through the air, then landed in the hot tub. Water splashed everywhere, but everything seemed to be going backwards, when I found myself in world war one. I held my breath underwater, every now and then poking my head up for air. Eventually I went back to the present, but believe me, the chances of me going back there are the chances of me forgetting it.

-{Kieran’s Point of view 2}-

So, after I hopped in the hot tub the first time, I went to the dinosaur age. Now I’m going back to see a new area. I hopped in the hot tub. Suddenly, everything slowed down. I ended up in world war one. Bullets were flying at me from everywhere, but suddenly I was converted to matrix mode. I leaped off cannonballs, being a badass. Eventually, I went to the hot tub time machine.

to be continued...